By Baitshephi Mashabe
Review Details
Reviewer has chosen not to be Anonymous
Overall Impression: Good
Suggested Decision: Undecided
Technical Quality of the paper: Good
Presentation: Good
Reviewer`s confidence: Medium
Significance: High significance
Background: Reasonable
Novelty: Clear novelty
Data availability: With exceptions that are admissible according to the data availability guidelines, all used and produced data are FAIR and openly available in established data repositories
Length of the manuscript: The length of this manuscript is about right
Summary of paper in a few sentences:
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Reasons to accept:
The manuscript proposes a theoretical framework for multivariate reliability design that accounts for clustering effects and provides an application comparing the proposed approach with several copula-based methods. The authors aim to introduce this novel approach to address limitations in existing approaches to multivariate extreme value modeling and reliability analysis. The proposed framework appears methodologically sound, and the results are clearly presented. The manuscript is generally well structured and readable.
Reasons to reject:
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Nanopublication comments:
Further comments:
[Page 9, line 315: Typo – “in in” appears; please delete one “in”.
Page 9, line 332: In the equation, it appears that n_{Y}^{λ} may be missing. Please verify.
Page 9, line 341: In equation (7), the variable Z is not clearly defined.
Page 10: Please check the equation numbering, as equation (18) could not be located.
Page 10, line 361: The phrase “is summarized” can be removed from the first sentence to avoid repetition.
Page 13, line 433: Please confirm whether the return period should be 11-year or 1-year.
Page 17, line 511: Please check whether “and” is missing between 4 and 5. Please check for any other typographical errors and correct them accordingly.
In addition, some conceptual statements regarding the limitations of extreme value theory appear too strong and potentially misleading. In particular, the manuscript suggests that multivariate reliability models are limited to two dimensions and that extreme value theory is fundamentally restricted by its one-dimensional nature. However, multivariate extreme value theory is well established for general d-dimensional settings, although practical applications often focus on low-dimensional cases due to data sparsity and estimation challenges. The authors should clarify or moderate these statements and provide appropriate references. Additionally, the claim that one-dimensional extreme value methods cannot assess whether data are sufficiently asymptotic should be reconsidered. While EVT is asymptotic in nature, several diagnostic tools (e.g., return level plots, probability plots, and quantile plots) are commonly used in practice to assess model adequacy.